This book is about a boy named Matiora who is trying to raise money so that his grandma can buy tickets for a concert. when Matiora was counting the money sefa came and took his violin when he was counting the money. sefa ran away with the violin. he ran into a bridge and was going to throw it down Matiora ran into him then sefa dropped the violin and said you pushed me.
I liked how you added detail in your work by explaining how the storie goes in your writing but next time double check the punctuation.
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ReplyDeleteI really like how you put the title and the picture next time put more pictures and check your punctuation other than that it is great.
Hi Lee,I like how you have included the book cover into this writing and it is good,but maybe next time check your punctuation before posting it.
ReplyDeleteHi Lee, I like how you told the reader what the book is about. Next time maybe you could add a description on why you did this
ReplyDeleteHi Lee.I like how you set up your work and I like how you explain the reader and what the book is about.Next time you could re-read check,capital letter,and remember a person name always start with a capital letter.GOOD WORK!
ReplyDeleteHey Lee, I like how you added in some facts about the book, and did you make that book cover? if you did its cool!
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