Sunday 1 November 2015
Monday 10 August 2015
Sunday 28 June 2015
6 STEP STORY
once upon a time there was a really talented and creative man named peter. He lived in a old rusty garage bye himself. Peters best talent that he loved was craving animals and chess pieces with wood that he saw around his house.his fear is when he's by himself he gets scared and has nightmares. He was angry because he always had nightmares and always woke up at night. When he thought about it he went to stay with his mum and dad then all his problems were solved.
Monday 22 June 2015
Moment in time
moment in time
As I saw my legs shaking and arms breaking in the cold water. I zoom down like a rocket as going down the death slide splash went the water I’m alive I said people laughed at me as I stood up.
I heard the wavy soft wind blow past my face.
I felt the ice cold water brush past my face. I felt like the world ended write at that point. I wonder if I was going to die at that moment.
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My Next Learning Steps:
Reading:
My learning goal is to understand words and meanings in the book and looking back in the text to find out what the words mean and what the purpose of the book is. I know this because it is in my ‘to be achieved’ box in my e-asttle console.I am going to work forward to achieving this goal by reading around the words and looking for information similar to what the word means.
Writing:
My learning goal is to use my vocabulary such as punctuation and sentences.
I know this because in my e-asttle console it says it in the gaps to gain more strength in, Ideas, Vocabulary, Sentence. I am going to work forward to this goal by checking my spelling words and learning what the definition is.
Maths:
My learning goal is to know tenths,tens,hundreds and thousands. I know this because it is in my e-asttle console in my “to be achieved box”.I am going to work forward to this goal by learning what the difference between tenths,tens,hundreds and thousands so that it is more identifiable to me.This Is my comments for my report.It tells you about what my goals are and how im going to achieve it.Hope you enjoy reading it Thank you .By Lee
Thursday 11 June 2015
HULK DESCRIPTION
as i saw a giant green bulking guy standing at the end of my street looking at me as if i did something wrong to him. his face made me wonder if i had seen him on a tv program before.his giant green feet stomped into the ground. he walked closer and closer i knew right away that it was the incredible hulk. i felt my heart bumming like never before. as i looked into his big black eyes i shouted arr hulk.when he walked closer he destroyed everything in his path.i ran to my house as fast as i could i ran to my dad and i said the hulk is coming as my dad said there is no such thing is hulk it is just a tv program .as i took my dad to the window and my dad shouted arr the hulk. when we went to our neighbour we knocked as hard as i we could and they said why are you here and what do you want.we said the hulk is coming we felt the ground shaking. everything was destroyed.
Tuesday 9 June 2015
KWL Why do Shark's eat people?
Why do shark eat people
Alot of people around the world died from shark attacks. But what I’m trying to do is try understand why do sharks attack humans.sharks eat people because they are scared more than we are scared of them.about of a dozen of sharks have been involved in attacks.the megalodon is one of the most dangerous shark on earth.but the megalodon went extinct about 1000 years ago.the giant megalodon chomped on whales with the most powerful bite of any animal that ever lived.Most sharks are meat eaters and so they feed on other fish and even other sharks. Larger sharks aren’t afraid to go after a huge meal such as a dolphin or a sea lion. They have a very keen sense of smell sharks can feel vibrations, and can see well in the water even at night so they never have trouble finding their prey.
In Term two we completed a KWL style inquiry of our choice. I chose to look at why sharks eat people. I hope you enjoy my learning. Please leave me a comment.
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