once upon a time there was a really talented and creative man named peter. He lived in a old rusty garage bye himself. Peters best talent that he loved was craving animals and chess pieces with wood that he saw around his house.his fear is when he's by himself he gets scared and has nightmares. He was angry because he always had nightmares and always woke up at night. When he thought about it he went to stay with his mum and dad then all his problems were solved.
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ReplyDeleteHey lee I like your hard work grate job keep it up :)
ReplyDeleteHi Lee,
ReplyDeleteGreat story!
I like how you told us about what Peter was good at!
Did you write this story for a class activity, or just for fun?
Maybe next time, just make sure that all of your punctuation is correct.
Thumbs up from me!
-Nikita